Reflection Task 1B
Today, I am introducing a man, Jadav Molai Payeng, to you. Maybe, a few of you have heard of his name. He is a forest worker from Indıan. He has a farm and sells milk to make living. In 1980s , he joined a tree plantation project over 200 hectares area with the other workers. After the project finished, other workers left but Molai chose to stay there. He looked after those trees and planted more trees.After a while, he transformed that area into a forest.The forest was named after his name ''Molai Forest' which homes to over deer, rabbits, elephants and other animals.There are also several thousands trees. Molai is not just looking after trees but also protecting animals from the poachers and people.He wants people to protect the world as he thinks that world is more beautiful with its natural beauties.I think we should take his attitude as a role model for us. If we want to benefit from the opportunities the world presents us, we should presents some opportunities to it ,as well. For example, we should also plant trees and we should try to make the world more beautiful by protecting it. We should try not to damage it, so we shouldn't cut off the trees and emit the gas to nature.
Today, I am introducing a man, Jadav Molai Payeng, to you. Maybe, a few of you have heard of his name. He is a forest worker from Indıan. He has a farm and sells milk to make living. In 1980s , he joined a tree plantation project over 200 hectares area with the other workers. After the project finished, other workers left but Molai chose to stay there. He looked after those trees and planted more trees.After a while, he transformed that area into a forest.The forest was named after his name ''Molai Forest' which homes to over deer, rabbits, elephants and other animals.There are also several thousands trees. Molai is not just looking after trees but also protecting animals from the poachers and people.He wants people to protect the world as he thinks that world is more beautiful with its natural beauties.I think we should take his attitude as a role model for us. If we want to benefit from the opportunities the world presents us, we should presents some opportunities to it ,as well. For example, we should also plant trees and we should try to make the world more beautiful by protecting it. We should try not to damage it, so we shouldn't cut off the trees and emit the gas to nature.
Dear Zehra,
YanıtlaSilI was really impressed with your sharing. I didn't hear anything of this man beforehand,so thank you for sharing this knowledge. He should be recognized more due to his environmental consciousness. We should take his attitude as a role model for us. I agree with you on this point. In addition,I am happy about the fact that there are such sensitive people in the world. Taking the content of your task,I can say you expressed your ideas by providing supporting sentences. I didn't need to read them several times to get the message you wanted to give. You also linked the sentences with appropriate connectors. There are not any irrelevant sentences. I think there are not any grammatical errors. Lastly,I want to ask a question to you. What kind of opportunities can we present to the world if we want to benefit from the opportunities it presents us? Can you give examples about this issue?