REFLECTION TASK 2A
 The Effects of Smart Phones
I want to talk about effects of the smart phones because people are very interested in these devices nowadays. We can see that three out of four people have smart phone. With the improving technology,the life is getting easier for people. Smart phone is one of these technological devices which affect people's lives.Thanks to this device,people can pay their bills on the phone without going to banks.They can have lots of applications which are useful for them. People can find almost their all needs in one device. Not only people but also companies and organizations benefit from the smart phones.They can make more sale for less cost and they can have a chance to reach to wide range of costumers because people check their message boxes in the phones rather than their e-mail boxes in the computers. Although it seems that there are lots of benefits for people, there are also negative impacts on people. For example, people record every important knowledge
on the phones and they use these phones much more than their brains to remember somethings. This causes their brains to weaken and lose the knowledge in the minds as the unused knowledge is forgotten. Moreover,people become unsocial when dealing with the cyber world in the phones.They spend time with messaging with people instead of speaking to them face to face.This situation may lead their communication skills to get worse.What's more, they may be affected from radiation of the phones. This affects adversely their health and they may have health problems.In conclusion, I think that people shouldn't depend on the smart phones unless they need these phones because these devices bring damage with the advantages.
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Dear Zehra,
YanıtlaSilI find your choice of topic is very interesting. I am also fond of these smart phones and these technologies. Your point of view is so appealing for me. Actually I am the one of them like in the picture. However, I had not thought in that way before. I am really shocked when I read your supporters. Considering your content, grammar and organisation, I can easily say that they are very clear and related to topic. Thanks to your reflection, I may give up this habit. Thanks for your contributions :)
Dear Zehra,
YanıtlaSilI read your reflection task,and I like it especially I like your topic.Like everyone, I am also interested in smart phones. Thanks to your different ideas, I have a different perspective about smart phones.You have mentioned both positive and negative effects of smart phones.I think this makes your reflection more beneficial for us. As for your language, you have used appropriate linking words.Your language is clear. As for your organization, I like your conclusion.However, I think you should write in more detail in your first paragraph when you told why you chose this topic.Overall, I like your reflection task.