I want to show you a film which I like very much. The Wanted is action thriller film which is based on comic book miniseries by
Mark Millar and .JG.Jones. The film is written by Chris Morgan, Michael Brant, Derek Haas and directed by Timur Bekmambetov The stars in the film are James McAvoy,Morgan Freeman, Angelina Jolie,Terence Stamp, Thomas Kretschmann.
The story is about Wesley Gibson (McAvoy) a frustrated account manager and his discovery of the fact that he is the son of a professional assassin.After this discovery, he decided to join the Fraternity,the secret society where his father worked.The plot is like: Wesley works at a bank with overbearing boss and takes anti-anxiety medicines for his panic attacks.Sustaining an ordinary and routine life, Wesley encounters a woman,Fox, who says that his father is murdered by an assassin,Cross, and he is now hunting Wesley.He joins the secret society and he takes some defence and attack courses. The society also gives order about killing people and they say that it is destiny that decides who will die.When he is ready to fight,he can take revenge of his father and serve the society.Cross leaves a clue to Wesley in order that he can find him,a clue with a bullet on his shoulder.Then Sloan who is leader of the society tells Wesley to kill Cross by saying that this is order of the fate.When Wesley chases up Cross, Sloan says Fox to kill Wesley.Wesley finds Cross and tries to kill him but Cross doesn't want to kill Wesley. At his final attack,Wesley kills Cross and Cross says that he is the father of Wesley.At these moments,Fox follows Wesley and tries to kill but she fails .Running away Wesley learns that Cross is his real father and the society deceits him as they know that the only person whom Cross can't kill is his son,Wesley. He also learns that Cross opposes to society as it does fraud so it makes him kill his father.Then, he wants to put an end to society but he is alone and society consists of more people.He learns his father's tactics and attacks to society.Through the end, he is surrounded by the members of the society.They are about to kill him.He tells the truth them and no one but Fox believe in him.Hence she kills everyone in the society including herself.
I liked it very much as it contains thrill,action and parental love together. The stars in the film are another effective cause to choose this film. The events and scenes are very effective and creative.It is not just a film but also some criticism.We can see that everything we believe in may not be correct and we can't see truth.However, our truth can make the wrongs correct.
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I want to show you a film which I like very much. The Wanted is action thriller film which is based on comic book miniseries by
Dear Zehra;
YanıtlaSilI read your writing. I loved it. Thanks to your sharing, I learned a new film. As to content, you started with introduction, made a summary of film and you wrote your thoughts. At the end of the paragraph, you also wrote the message of the film. Gramatically, you did so well. As I see, there is no mistake. It is a good paragraph.
Thank you :)
asıl sana thank you :D
SilDear Zehra;
YanıtlaSilI read your writing .At the beginning of it, you mentioned the background of movie.You also mentioned the director and the stars of movie.I have not watched this movie ,but you described it very well. You made a good content, introduction and summary of movie.You explained the plot of movie in a very detailed way so , as a reader I can understand the plot of movie very well.This movie made me a good impression and I will watch this movie as soon as it is possible.Furthermore, you used the trailer and the poster of movie, so you made the readers eager to watch this movie. If I look at your writing grammatically, there is no mistake.You did so well. I think it is a well -developed writing in terms of organization and grammer usage.Lastly, I liked your writing
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Dear Friend Zehra ,
YanıtlaSilI like your journal very much. At the beginning of it , you mentioned about the plot of this movie. As a reader , I can easily comprehend the story of it. You describe it very well. It is in a very detailed way. You also explained your personal opinions about the content in a positive way . It makes the readers eager to watch this movie. Furthermore, you stated why you found this movie interesting . Thanks to the trailer of the movie, we can also gain information about it.However, you did not talk about the directot of the film.I really want to learn: What do you think about Timur Bekmambetov.I watched this movie before and I loved it.I think that he is amazing.I just want to learn what you are thinking about him. I think it is a well -developed paragraph in terms of organization and grammer usage.Moreover, using GİF for your journal makes it attractive. Lastly, I really wonder who is your favourite character in this movie ?
of course Wesley , honey :D did you believe that you asked this :D
SilHi Zehra
YanıtlaSilI read your task and I really enjoy it. You chosed good film the player of which are talented person and the topic of which is reaaly attractive , so I appreciate you. You worked in order because you wrote the events in the film according to the sequence of events.All sentences you used are about the same film which helps the paragraph to become well-organized. The linking words are used appropriately. I didn't find any mistake in terms of grammar , preposition or word order. Thank you for informing us about this good film.